What Others Say About The
Author:
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the incredible practicality of the advice -- is the enthusiasm
for what we do. If that, interwoven with your compelling
personal story, doesn't motivate a reader to get out there and
do it, he or she should give up all notions of writing and
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highly. Five stars. No make that ten!"
--Bob Bly,
author of The Copywriter's Handbook and over 50 other
titles.
SECRETS of a
WRITING
HUSTLER
How to Beat the Odds, Overcome
Rejection --
and Succeed as a
Writer!
ROSCOE BARNES
III
Copyright ©
2005 Roscoe Barnes III
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SECRETS of a
WRITING
HUSTLER
How to Beat the Odds, Overcome
Rejection --
and Succeed as a
Writer!
ROSCOE BARNES
III
DEDICATION
To Roberta Lawyer, my special
friend and the person
who encouraged me to write
this book.
To my sons, Roscoe IV and
Jeremy, two of the most
talented young men
around.
To Don Sanders, Ollie Ryas and
Mark Walters, my
childhood friends who were
more like my actual
brothers. Their friendship
will always be cherished.
To my mother, Bertha Mae
Barnes, a brilliant
story-teller, and to the
memory of my father, Roscoe
Barnes Jr. Without them I
would not be what I am
today.
To my grandmother, Aslea King;
and to the memory of
my late grandparents, McKinley
and Alberta Jackson,
both of whom were gifted
story-tellers.
I also dedicate this book to
my four awesome brothers:
Wiley, Roy Lee, Jimmy and
Emerson; my four beautiful
sisters: Alberta, Barbara,
Vivian and Tina; and my
dear cousin, Brenda
Marsh.
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
First and foremost, I want to
thank Robert W. Bly, Joe
Vitale, Norman B. Rohrer and
Richard Armstrong for
their support, instructions,
guidance and all the
encourgement they have given
me over the years.
Grateful acknowledgments are
made to Jim Abbott and
David Rushing of The
Enterprise-Tocsin; Hal Sharpe of
The Littleton Observer; B.J.
Small and Robert Holt of
The Gettysburg Times; Lee
Goodwin, sports writer; Stan
Schwartz of Publishers'
Auxiliary; George Reis of Fund
Raising Management; and Sue
Hadden, Pat Patterson,
Scott Weaver, George McKee and
Denny Shockey of The
Record Herald. All of these
individuals have played a
role in my growth as a
writer.
A heart-felt thank-you is owed
Greta Cummings who
encouraged me in the beginning
to keep on writing in
the face of
rejection.
Special acknowledgments are
made to my childhood
teachers, Robert Whalen, Eddie
Dennis and Mary Kent,
who motivated me to be all
that I could be.
I also want to offer special
thanks to my publisher
and editor, Maury and Beth
Erickson. They are two of
the finest professionals I've
come to know. It is
because of their enthusiasm,
hard work and support for
this book, that it is now
published. I am more than
grateful.
Last but not least, special
credit is due to the text formatters and graphic artists at
Filbert Publishing.
Thanks to all of you for
making it possible for me to
shine and to discover the
beauty and power of writing.
“You can survive as a writer on hustle:
You get very little for each piece, but you write a lot
of pieces.”
-- Kurt Vonnegut
“You may not be a success, but if you can
handle words, you will never
starve.”
-- Dr. Sherwood E. Wirt
“Today’s markets, in reality, require
more. They call for you to be
ruthless, sly, and to take no
prisoners.”
-- Michael Sedge
Secrets of a Writing
Hustler
TABLE OF
CONTENTS
PREFACE: Why I Wrote this
Book ~ 14
INTRODUCTION: What You Can
Expect From Reading this Book ~ 16
PART I: SNAPSHOTS OF A
HUSTLER:
A Personal Essay of How a Poor
Country Boy Found Fame,
Power and Writing
Success
PREVIEW ~ 22
Essay
HOW I BECAME A WRITING
HUSTLER
An Unexpected Journey from
Cotton Fields
to Journalism and Writing
Success ~ 23
PART II: STRATEGY FOR
SUCCESS:
A Proven Plan for Getting
Published, Making Money,
Finding Work and Enhancing
Your Name Recognition
as a Writer
PREVIEW ~ 51
Chapter 1
THE 12 MOST COMMON
OBSTACLES TO WRITING SUCCESS
How to Recognize – and
Overcome -- the Hurdles that Can Hinder
Your Writing Career ~
52
Chapter 2
A BLUEPRINT FOR
SUCCESS
How to Break into Print and
Sell More of Your Writing Products and Services ~
60
Chapter 3
COPING WITH
REJECTION
How to Succeed Against the
Odds ~ 76
Chapter 4
DEALING WITH WRITER’S
BLOCK
10 Ways to Unlock Your
Creative Flow -- and Finish Your Work on Time ~
83
PART III: SECRETS OF GOOD
WRITING:
Practical Advice for Improving
Your Style and Techniques
in Nonfiction
PREVIEW ~ 86
Chapter 5
HOW TO WRITE LIKE A
MASTER
A Few Good Tips and Practical
Ideas from One of the
Best-Selling Authors of All
Time ~ 88
Chapter 6
HOW TO CHOOSE A HIT FORMULA
TO TELL YOUR STORIES
The Three Best Ways to Open -
and Organize - Your Articles ~ 91
Chapter 7
HOW TO BRUTALIZE YOUR WORK
– AND MAKE IT SPARKLE
Essential Concepts for Editing
and Polishing like a Pro ~ 94
Chapter 8
HOW TO WRITE A GOOD
NARRATIVE
Easy-to-Use Pointers from a
Popular Cartoon ~ 99
Chapter 9
HOW TO WRITE FEATURES WITH
IMPACT
How to Infuse Your Writing
with Emotion ~ 102
Chapter 10
HOW TO USE ANECDOTES TO
KIDNAP READERS –
AND KEEP THEM BEGGING FOR
MORE
Proven Ways to Add Depth,
Credibility and Interest to Your Writing ~
107
Chapter 11
HOW TO EAVESDROP YOUR WAY
TO BETTER WRITING TECHNIQUES
An Easy Way to Add Color to
Your Prose ~ 111
PART IV: SECRETS OF GOOD
COPYWRITING:
Vital Tips for Writing Ads,
Press Releases, Direct
Mail and Other Marketing
Literature
PREVIEW ~
114
Chapter 12
HOW TO ENTICE PROSPECTS --
AND MAKE THEM HUNGRY
FOR YOUR
OFFER
Great Tips for Turning Your
Sales Message into Mouth-Watering Prose ~
116
Chapter 13
HOW TO USE TRIGGER PHRASES
THAT MAKE PEOPLE ACT – NOW!
Sure-Fire Ways to Write Copy
that Induces an Immediate Response ~ 120
Chapter 14
HOW TO QUOTE YOUR WAY TO
BETTER COPY
Quick and Easy Ways to Nail the
Attention of Readers
~
125
Chapter 15
HOW TO WRITE THE ULTIMATE
PRESS RELEASE – AND GET MORE THAN FREE
PUBLICITY
The Secret to Turning Your
Media Message into a Direct Response Tool ~
131
Chapter 16
HOW TO WRITE AN ADVERTORIAL
THAT HOOKS READERS AND PULLS RESPONSE
Proven Ways to Write and
Design an Article-like Ad that’s Irresistible ~
135
Chapter
17
HOW TO MAKE YOUR DIRECT MAIL
PACKAGE A WINNER
A Fool-Proof Check List for Better
Lead Generation ~
139
Chapter 18
HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR LETTERS
AND OTHER
MARKETING
LITERATURE
What Daytime Soaps can Teach
You about Writing Good Copy ~ 142
THE WRITING HUSTLER’S
PLEDGE ~ 146
ABOUT THE AUTHOR ~
149
PREFACE
Why I Wrote this
Book
Hustle: “To obtain by energetic activity; to sell or
promote energetically.”
-- Merrian-Webster
Online
Secrets of a Writing
Hustler was written to show writers how
to succeed in selling more of their words -- or their
writing related products and services -- by hustling. The
goal is to help them overcome their odds, see their
potential and then tap into the power and joy of being a
writing hustler.
The idea for this work was born in
response to the many people who’ve asked me: “How did you
get started as a writer?” Others wanted to know how I
became obsessed, or as I call it, “addicted” to writing
and the whole process of being published. In addition to
these questions, people have wondered how I broke into so
many different forms of writing.
For instance, many admirers know me as a
newspaper reporter while others know me as a “tractster,”
a writer and publisher of religious pamphlets known as
“gospel tracts.” Some people see me as an author and
seminar leader and some see me as a copywriter who
specializes in direct mail copy for business-to-business
and fundraising clients. My byline has appeared in
business, Christian, writing and fundraising trade
publications.
Yep, a wide-ranging number of fields.
This, by the way, doesn’t include my published work in
art, fiction and military subjects. Not a few of my
readers have asked how a black man, an African American
born in poverty in the Mississippi Delta, can become a
nationally known wordsmith. Oh, I blush at the thought.
But as Walter Brennan used to say, “No brag, just
fact.”
This book is my story. A memoir of sorts.
It tells you, as best as I can recall, how I became a
writer and why I am so addicted to hustling in this
profession. It shows some of the struggles and rejection
I’ve had, as well as the avenues I took to find success.
It also reveals my discovery of power – the kind that is
felt and released through the written word. Along the way
are tips and ideas for your own success. After all, if I
can do it, anyone can – including YOU!
Some people, I believe, realize I haven’t
yet become a millionaire. (Notice the word “yet.”) They
also know I’m a stranger to the New York Times Bestseller
List. Yet, having seen my literary output and my smiling
mug since the early 1980s, a growing number of people are
apparently curious.
I like to say that even though I have not
made that first million, I’m having a lot of fun and
finding true fulfillment. Most importantly, I’m using my
gift of writing for the benefit of others. It’s like
planting seeds, with the hope of seeing a good crop. As a
writer, I plant seeds of ideas with the aim of affecting
change and nurturing growth in the most positive way
imaginable.
My driving ambition is to leave an
enduring mark and to make such an impression with the
written word that the people who read me will become
enlightened, inspired, motivated, informed and
transformed for the higher good.
This may be asking a lot, I know. But I’m
so convinced of the power of writing that I believe,
let’s face it -- anything is possible. And I might add,
if only a handful of people – or even a single person –
are helped in some small way by the things I write, then
hey, it is well worth it.
Perhaps Stephen King said it best in his
book, On Writing: A
Memoir. “In the end,” he
said. “[Writing is] about enriching the lives of those
who will read your work and enriching your own life, as
well.”
If you, after reading this book, come away
with fresh ideas, a sense of empowerment and enthusiasm,
with a determination to excel as a published writer or
successful copywriter, then I will be happy. For the
purpose of this book will have been realized.
Here’s wishing you much
success.
Roscoe Barnes III
‘The Writing
Hustler’
Baltimore, Md.
Nov. 22, 2003
INTRODUCTION
What You can Expect from
Reading this Book
Hustler: “An
enterprising person determined to succeed;
go-getter.”
-- InfoPlease.com
As a 12-year-old black kid in the
Mississippi Delta, I chopped cotton, raised hogs and
plowed fields to help support my family of 11. Today, at
42, I’m an award-winning journalist, and former columnist
for two national publications. I’m also a freelance
copywriter whose words are used each day to sell millions
of dollars worth of products and services. Simply stated,
I wrote my way to the top using strategies that guarantee
success. Those strategies are revealed here
in:
SECRETS OF A WRITING
HUSTLER
How to Beat the Odds,
Overcome Rejection –
And Succeed as a
Writer
Although scores of books have been written
on various aspects of writing, most are either too narrow
or too broad in their focus to benefit the struggling
writer.
Secrets of a Writing
Hustler is
“Confessions of an Advertising
Man meets
On Writing
Well.”As such, itis part memoir and
part how-to. This guide is a “one-stop shop” for
freelance writers, journalists, copywriters, and
entrepreneurs. It provides practical, easy-to-follow
ideas and instructions on how to slip through barriers,
beat rejection, weave killer copy, crack multiple markets
and succeed as a writer.
Unlike other books that focus on writing
alone, marketing alone, magazine markets or book
markets, Secrets of a Writing
Hustler covers all
the bases and it does with a flare of inspiration and
entertainment. The advice is based on my 20-plus years of
experience as a journalist, copywriter, author and
freelance writer for magazines. To date, I’ve authored
numerous books and training guides (some self-published).
And I’ve had gospel tracts published by some of the
leading Christian publishing houses.
Hustling: It’s more than hard
work
The term “hustler” is fitting because of
the work needed to succeed. Hustlers are shrewd,
hard-working, persistent, creative, prolific and daring.
They can thrive on rejection and enjoy the challenge of
getting past “No.” They are slick and sometimes covert in
their efforts to overcome odds. They love competition and
will do nearly anything to win.
Hustlers are fast and furious. They can
weasel past editors and stubborn business people -- and
still get their work sold. They are thrifty about their
spending and knowledgeable about their craft. They know
when to gamble and when to hold back. They are relentless
in marketing and self-promotion, having no problem with
tooting their own horn. They also are survivors who are
addicted to hard work.
Why another book on
writing?
Let’s face it: Writers and editors are
frustrated. Writers get tired of being rejected and
editors get tired of wasting time on material that’s
unsuitable for their readers.
Despite the thousands of new outlets
consisting of book publishers, online publications, and
all of the technological resources available today,
freelance writers continue to struggle with rejection.
They find it hard to break into print. And for many who
find print, establishing themselves as full-time writers
is often met with disappointment. Others find it hard to
write with impact. They dream of crafting a powerful
article or news story, but lack the skills that can make
that happen. Indeed, William Zinsser was right when he
said, “Few people realize how badly they
write.”
Copywriters are not excluded. “Today,
poorly written, ineffective ads, press releases, catalogs
and brochures are the norm rather than the exception,”
observed Robert W. Bly. “Top professionals complain that
recent college graduates are ill-equipped to write the
type of succinct prose necessary to awaken an interest in
ideas, organizations, products, and services.”
User-friendly resource for different types of
writers
Secrets of a Writing
Hustler speaks
directly to the beginning
writer in search of
his or her first byline. It addresses the needs
of experienced
writers who want to
excel by selling more of their articles to magazines and
newspapers. It provides direction for
the frustrated
writer who is sick and
tired of rejection -- and all the discouragement that
comes with it. The book also speaks to
the journalist who desires to write compelling stories that hook
readers and grab them by the throat. Then it reaches out
to the copywriter and businessperson who crave commercial copy that gets
results.
As odd as it may
sound, Secrets of a Writing
Hustler really is a
“one size fits all” type of resource. Despite its
comprehensive nature, however, it provides the critical
details that are relevant and essential to the different
writing forms.
Writer’s
‘survival guide’ and ‘professional toolkit’
Secrets of a Writing
Hustler gives you a
taste of story-telling that flows with lessons from real
life. For instance, it outlines the pitfalls of a writing
career and explains in detail how to overcome rejection.
It shows you how to have a promising start that will
increase your chances of success. It also gives you the
tried-and-true secrets of good writing – the kind that
sells; and the money-making secrets of good copywriting
-- the kind that gets results.
This book is nothing short of a
writer’s survival
guide or, if you
prefer, a professional
tool kit. It seeks to
challenge and motivate you while showing you how to write
like the masters, how to craft powerful narratives, how
to use anecdotes and add color to a piece of nonfiction.
The book goes even further by discussing the rules and
principles of effective commercial copy. Among other
things, it shows you how to write hard-hitting ads, sales
letters, direct mail, press releases and other types of
marketing literature.
Unique blend of story-telling and
practical lessons
Like Stephen
King’s On
Writing, Secrets of a Writing
Hustler weds a
powerful personal narrative with simple advice for
improving your craft. The narrative serves as the
springboard for the book. It lays the foundation and
shows how I rose from poverty in the cotton fields of the
Mississippi Delta to become a widely published writer. It
helps you to see that if I can do it, you can,
too.
In addition to sharing a personal
narrative, Secrets of a Writing
Hustler guides you
through the editorial mine fields. It shines the light on
the most common obstacles faced by writers and offers
guidance for overcoming these obstacles. The book,
written in a conversational style, gives you a 10-point
plan for finding success. Everything is covered from tips
to getting started to advice for cracking multiple
markets. Suggestions for self-promotion and marketing are
included, along with strategies for beating writer’s
block and the sting of rejection. A few pointers on
self-publishing and Print-On-Demand are also
given.
Beyond the mechanics of getting publishing
and the fundamentals of
marketing, Secrets of a Writing
Hustler offers a
clinic of sorts in writing nonfiction and commercial
copy. It uses 14 chapters to show you how to write for
magazines, newspapers, online publications, ad agencies,
public relations firms and businesses, among other
markets.
In short, it explains what it really takes
to writewell --
and prosper.
Perhaps I should note
thatmost of the how-to chapters
were taken from columns I wrote for two national
publications, and various trade magazines,
including Fund Raising
Management, Publishers’
Auxiliary, HomeBusiness
Magazine, Writer’s
Forum, Marketing
Solutions, Mailorder
Messenger, Jack
Pot, The Writers’
Journal, Marketing
Solutions, Expert
Marketing.
Contents and
Style
Secrets of a Writing
Hustler is written
primarily with the beginner in mind. Though
professionally crafted, the book has a personal feel and
a style that’s friendly and yet serious. In this format,
it serves up the essential elements for achieving writing
success. It uses a straight-forward, simple approach with
colorful language and timely anecdotes and examples.
Scores of references and engaging quotes from respectable
sources are sprinkled throughout to aid you in further
study.
Secrets of a Writing
Hustler consists of
19 chapters. Each chapter is broken up with headlines and
sub-headlines, which make for scanning or easy reading –
and less intimidation. To ensure easy comprehension and
quick application, it is divided into four
sections:
* Section One: A
narrative of how I became a writing hustler.
Rather than tell my life story, it offers snapshots of
what led to my success. My training, rejection, my
reading, risks and my success are all covered.
Experiences highlighted are those in journalism,
freelance writing, copywriting, and marketing.
* Section
Two: Covers the
most common
obstacles faced by
writers. It also gives a blueprint for writing success,
along with tips for dealing with rejection and writer’s
block. It covers all the nuts and bolts of getting
published, as well as the tricks of the trade for
effective marketing and self-promotion.
* Section
Three: Pure teaching
on nonfictionwriting
techniques. It gives tips for
various writing forms, sure-fire methods for good editing
and revision, and proven ways to breathe life into dead
manuscripts. Fresh ideas are presented for creating
articles that sell.
* Section
Four: Focuses
on commercial
writing. It offers time-tested
methods for crafting persuasive copy. Innovative
approaches are given to show readers how to transform
weak copy into words that work – words that grab
attention and induce response. Numerous examples are
given to help you understand the ingredients of a
successful ad, sales letter, direct mail package and
other commercial documents.
The format makes Secrets of a
Writing Hustler a
perfect handbook or a quick-reference guide. Like any
good practical how-to manual, it may be read from cover
to cover, or simply by topic or by chapter – whichever
way that interests you at any given moment.
I do have two favors to ask:
First, at the end of this book, you will
see “The Writing Hustler’s
Pledge.” Read it closely
and ponder its message. If you feel you can agree with it
and you’re serious about becoming a “writing hustler,”
then please sign it as an affirmation of your goals and
your commitment to excellence. Feel free to cut it out.
Frame it and place it on the wall near your desk. Read it
when you feel discouraged. Soak it in as you achieve your
goals.
Second, WhenSecrets of a
Writing Hustler helps you in any way, such as getting published,
making more money or closing a deal for a writing
assignment, will you let me know of your success? I can
be reached through the publisher of this book or
at: WritingHustler2000@yahoo.com.
I look forward to hearing from you and to
congratulating you on your success as a
… Writing
Hustler.
PART I
SNAPSHOTS OF A
HUSTLER:
A Personal Essay of How a Poor
Country Boy Found Fame,
Power and Writing
Success
“A hustler is
someone who makes a living by seizing opportunities. Hustlers
are therefore resourceful and often ingenious…. They apply a
thorough knowledge of human psychology and market trends to
their work and are adept at discovering a need and filling
it.”
-- Hustling Jamaican
Style-- Susan Knight and Tony
Lowrie
PREVIEW:
As opposed to a full-length autobiography,
this section presents a personal essay – a few snapshots
-- of how I was shaped as a writer. Although written with
elements to entertain, its primary objective is not to be
literary – but to teach and inspire. With this in mind, I
give insight into my childhood as an African American in
the Mississippi Delta. At the same time, I chronicle my
discovery of writing and my growth through trial and
error. Anecdotes, tips and advice from mentors are
sprinkled throughout.
A number of turning points are
highlighted:
-
My dream
of writing while chopping cotton.
-
A broken
heart that motivated me and strengthened my resolve to
begin writing.
-
A
home-study course that gave me a foundation.
-
My first
published magazine article.
-
My first
job as a newspaper reporter.
-
My
discovery of mailorder and self-publishing.
-
My first
book contract from a traditional publisher.
-
My first
column for a national publication.
-
My venture
into public speaking.
-
My work as
an independent copywriter.
HOW I BECAME A
WRITING HUSTLER
An Unexpected Journey from
Cotton Fields
to Journalism and Writing
Success
The young blue-eyed reporter was
all smiles when she came to interview me about my
writing. She perked up and even giggled a bit when she
asked how I got started. But when she heard my answer,
she dropped her pen and her face turned beet
red.
Indeed, it was not the answer she
had expected.
Truth be
told, I became interested in writing out of curiosity and
a desire to simply express myself. But I began writing
seriously and passionately out of
revenge-- wanting only to get even
with the girl who broke my heart. Although revenge wasn’t
the only reason, it was for the most part, the main
reason I became determined to learn the craft and
establish myself as a selling writer.
The girl in question was named
Beatrice. She left me when I was 18 and ran off to marry
an older guy. At the time, I had not heard “success is
the best revenge,” but somehow I believed it. Just maybe,
I thought, success as a writer would be the key to
getting Beatrice back. With all my heart, I also wanted
to make her wish she’d never left me.
But how could I
become a writer with so many odds stacked against me. I
was black, poor and a lousy speller. I had no writing
role models, no books or magazines on writing and no one
to show me the ropes of getting
published.
So where would I
begin? How would I find my
way?
The answers would
come where least
expected.
Growing up in
the Mississippi
Delta
I was born on
Feb. 6, 1961, in Indianola, Miss., a small rural town in
the area known as the Delta. It is situated in the
northwestern part of the state between Greenville and
Greenwood. As a kid, I worked in the cotton fields and
plantations that surrounded the town. The work was common
among blacks, especially
teenagers.
Like other places
in Mississippi, my town was segregated and actually
divided by railroad tracks: The blacks lived on one side
and the whites lived on the other. Our public school
system was predominately black as most white students
attended a private
school.
I come from a
large, close-knit family, having four brothers: Wiley,
Roy, Jimmy and Emerson; and four sisters: Alberta,
Barbara, Vivian and Tina. Our parents infused our home
with love, hard work and iron-like determination. My
father, Roscoe Jr. (who passed a few days before
Christmas in 1999), was fond of saying, “There’s a way to
do anything! Hard work won’t kill you, but laziness sure
will.”
My father, a
stoutly built man with light skin and a caucasian nose,
was the first hustler I knew. He worked as a mechanic in
the local textile factory; but at home he worked as a
“shade tree” mechanic, repairing cars for many poor
blacks in the community. My mother, Bertha Mae, was the
traditional housewife who stayed at home and cared for
the children. And as far as I’m concerned, she was also
the best cook in Mississippi. My mother was
affectionately called “Muddear” by my siblings and me.
People admired her for her long jet-black hair that
touched her lower back. She was a petite light-skinned
woman with high cheekbones – and a temper the size of a
grizzly. Our neighbors thought she was part Cherokee.
Sometimes my mother was teased for having bow legs. But
we kids never laughed because we had bow legs,
too.
For most of my
childhood, we lived in a five-room house on Oak Street.
During the first few years we lived there, we raised hogs
and chickens and later, a few ducks and geese, all of
which provided food for the family. A large garden was
used to grow corn, okra, mustards and other types of
vegetables. My favorite dinner from the garden was a
plate of pinto beans and corn bread, covered with catsup
and sugar. We ate fried chicken almost daily. Sometimes I
added two or three ears of well-buttered corn, just to
take the meal to the next
level.
Although greens –
mustards, collards, cabbage – were loved by all, fried
okras and squash were treated like a delicacy. Whenever
we exhausted food from the garden, we ate the basics: a
bowl of buttermilk and cornbread with a spoonful of
sugar.
During hunting
season, nothing tasted as good as game food. Well-cooked
rabbit, squirrel, coon, and yes, ‘possum, were all
staples of the dinner table. ‘Possum, by the way, was
best when baked in a pan surrounded by sweet potatoes;
coon tasted better when barbequed on a grill. If we were
lucky while driving, we’d hit a few rabbits on the road
and take them home for the skillet. Rabbits were good
anyway you cooked
them.
It’s funny,
though, how the love of game food can follow you well
into your teens. And sometimes, it can lead to some
strange
experiences.
Rendezvous
with a ‘possum
One chilly autumn
night, my brother, Roy, and I got the surprise of a life
time. Roy, a year younger than me, was the tall, lanky
one in our family. He had big brown eyes, a big afro and
he sometimes stuttered when he got excited. He was known
in school as a great dancer, but his favorite pass-time
was hunting – something he was extremely good at. This
night, he was driving past a cotton field when a ‘possum
appeared on the right side of the
road.
“You see that?” he
said, his eyes widening. “That’s a
possum!”
“Where ‘bout?” I
asked, trying to roll down the window for fresh air. Roy
and I had practically bathed in Gray Flannel® Cologne and
the strong fragrance was making me dizzy. Guess it was a
cultural thing. All that cologne. At least, that’s what
I’d been told. It was also a good way to pick up girls.
Something else I’d been
told.
“I don’t see no
‘possum,” I said, and started munching on sunflower
seeds.
Roy slowed down
and pointed his headlights to the side of the road.
That’s when I saw the ‘possum. From a distance, he looked
like a white ball of
fur.
“There it is!
You’re right,” I said, spitting seeds. “Let’s get
him!”
Roy quickly
veered to the right and darted onto the shoulder and –
BOOMPED! He stopped the car and I got
out.
“Yep, you got him
alright,” I said, still munching on
seeds.
“Make sure he’s
dead,” Roy said.
“He is,” I said.
“Here, take a look. He’s a big fat greasy one!” And that,
he was. In fact, he looked like a giant rat with a Buddha
belly.
I held the
‘possum up and then placed him in a brown paper bag and
tossed him on the back seat. We then headed home with
plans to clean it and serve it up for a late night snack.
But a few minutes later, we heard something on the back
seat.
“You hear that?”
Roy asked.
“Naw. What’s
up?”
“Ah, nothin’, I
guess. Just thought I heard
somethin’.”
When we came to a
stop light, we both heard a hissing sound. Roy and I
looked back at the same time and -- ugh! The possum was
climbing the back of my seat and his mouth was wide
open.
“Good god
almighty!” I shouted and jumped out of the car. I hit the
street running.
“Come back here!”
cried Roy. “Get that d--- thing outta
here!”
I turned to go
back to the car, but before I could get there, I saw Roy
cussing, waving his arms and falling out of the driver’s
side window, his bell-bottom jeans kicking in the air. I
never could understand why he didn’t open the door. Even
so, we lost our late night snack. So much for road-kill.
We went home and ate fried catfish, soaked in hot
sauce.
Rats and
roaches
Long before Roy
and I were old enough to drive, our family lived in an
old white-framed house that had its share of problems.
Besides being infested with rats, it did little to shield
us from the cold. Still we were happy and never went
without food. In fact, we kids got used to the rats, so
much so, that we played with them and devised games for
trapping them. My younger brother, Jimmy, the daring one,
would often catch one of the gray-haired creatures and
flush it down the toilet. We’d all laugh as the poor
creature started spiraling faster and faster until it was
out of sight.
The only time we
kids made a fuss over the rats, was when one or more had
died from the poison our father set out and started to
rot inside the walls of the house. Needless to say, their
musty, putrid odor competed mightily with the
chitterlings we used to
cook.
Then there were
the cock roaches, some of the nastiest creatures around.
But as barefoot kids without many toys, except those we
carved from wood, we made sport of the dirty critters.
Take my brother, Roy, a real sharpshooter with his water
gun. He could hit three or four roaches at a time while
standing six feet away. Not one to be outdone, I’d pull
out my sling shot, the kind carried by “Dennis the
Menace.” Slowly and steadily I would take aim, hold my
breath … and –
POW!
I hit the roaches
so hard, I dented walls and broke everything in sight,
including a kitchen window. Of course this fun was
short-lived when our father sprayed the house with DDT –
some potent stuff that smelled of rotten cabbage. It
killed so many roaches, we’d spend days sweeping them up.
DDT was so strong we used to say, “If the poison didn’t
kill the roaches, the stink should would.” I believe the
roaches agreed.
The beauty of
storytelling
My father was
known as an outdoorsman (an expert hunter) and a tough
guy who could fix anything, but my mother was known for
her storytelling abilities, something she inherited from
her mother, Alberta Jackson. These two ladies could make
any story exciting. They could hold an audience
spell-bound for hours. I remember the many Saturday
nights that my siblings and I would visit our
grandmother’s house. For some reason, the house always
smelled of coffee and
Noxema®.
After getting
sweaty and dirty from playing outside, we kids would go
indoors for the night and sit at the feet of my mother
and grandmother, both of whom would dip Garret® Snuff and
tell stories about their childhood. We’d eat popcorn and
drink sugar water as the tales got deeper. Some of the
stories were funny. Some involved witchcraft. Some were
so horrifying, I was afraid to go to bed at night. Yet,
all of them were entertaining. And sometimes better than
the stuff on TV.
As I look back
over my life as a communicator, I am convinced that I
inherited the gift of communication from these two
ladies. Both of whom were also readers. (By the way, my
mother just turned 70 and she still reads Marvel
Comics.)
The gift of
storytelling provided comic relief in the cotton fields,
where I began working at the age of 9. At first, I picked
cotton and made only pennies. When automation took over
and replaced picking by hand, my siblings and I took up
hoes and started chopping. Typically, we’d work from
sun-up to sun-down in a climate that was often humid,
dusty and extremely hot, even in the shade. As kids, we’d
wipe sweat, drink lots of water and then pass away the
time by telling stories. Oral communication was the only
thing that kept us going. It allowed us to laugh and
ignore the scorching sun, insect bites, and aching feet.
On our worst days, we prayed for rain. And sometimes it
came with such a downpour, we would scurry from the
fields, load up on our truck (or field bus) and go home
early, all the while talking loud, making noise and
laughing to the top of our
voices.
Field and
dreams
It was during
this time in the fields that I used to dream of being a
writer. Where the idea originated, I’m not sure. Perhaps
it was sparked by my interest in Bruce Lee and the
legendary success he achieved. Bruce was my idol and I
wanted to be like him in every way. He represented
everything I wanted to achieve. Then again, my interest
in writing may have been kindled by my addiction to
Marvel Comics. I don’t know. But sometimes, while
chopping cotton, I would speak about writing with such
passion, my friends and siblings would call me
crazy.
“Go on and laugh,”
I once told them as I bent over to pull weeds from a
stalk of cotton. “When I leave high school, I’m gonna be
somebody. I’m gonna write books and
everything.”
“What kinda
books?” my friend, Buddy, asked. He was a tall, hyper kid
with a tight hair cut, a few pimples and a perpetual
smile. He also had a penchant for spitting. He didn’t dip
snuff and he didn’t chew tobacco. He just loved to spit.
“What kinda writer you gonna be?” he
asked.
“I don’t know,” I
said, standing up to continue chopping. “But I’m gonna
write and be
published.”
“Hey man,” Buddy
said. “Let me see your hands.” He spat on the ground.
“Let me see.”
I stopped
chopping for a moment and held out my hands. They were
blistered and hardened from gripping the hoe all day –
and that without gloves. They also had calluses
developing from my training in the Martial Arts. I’d
spent hours on end punching sand and straw in an attempt
to toughen my hands for breaking boards and bricks. At
any rate, Buddy examined my hands – and
grinned.
“See,” he said,
wiping sweat from his brow. “You can’t write with hands
like that.” He spat. “Man, you’re a
laborer!”
Everybody
laughed.
“Then I guess
we’ll have to see,” I said. “Anything is possible.
There’s a way to do
anything!”
Admittedly, the
idea of writing did seem far-fetched. After all, there
were no black writers in our community and no role models
to guide or inspire me in such a venture. Our town had a
weekly newspaper, The
Enterprise-Tocsin
, but all of its
writers were
white.
Finding love
and writing
tracts
At the age of 15,
I became a born again Christian and fell in love with the
bible and Christian literature. A short time after this
experience, I met Beatrice during a revival service and
fell in love with her. Beatrice was dark-skinned and had
eyes like almonds. She had a tiny waist and shapely hips,
much like a “brick house,” the kind described in the
1970s’ song by The Commodores. Her smile, her voice and
her perfume were simply sweet and intoxicating. Often
she’d wear skirts that accentuated his curves. And when
she walked into a room, she got everyone’s attention.
What made this even more engaging was the fact that she
was older than I. Two years older! She was in college and
I was still in high school. Wow! I was living the dream
of many boys my age. I had an “older
woman.”
However, despite
the power of Beatrice’s feminine charm, whenever we would
get together, we’d talk about the bible, Christian books
and gospel tracts. We were Christians. Spirit-filled
Christians. We spoke in tongues. And we had to stay holy.
Sometimes we’d enjoy the hot humid nights of summer by
attending tent meetings where out-of-town evangelists
would come and pray for the sick. Other times, we’d get
away from the Delta mosquitoes by driving around
Sunflower County in my ’65 Dodge pickup, which was apple
red -- the color that also looked good on Beatrice. We
would hold hands and listen to the music of Andrae
Crouch. Our favorite songs were “Through it All” and “If
Heaven Was Never Promised …” This was love and I was one
happy critter.
One day while
reading a few tracts, I felt the urge to begin writing. I
was around 16. Before this time, I’d only dream of
writing. But now I felt the need to get started. There
was a feeling, a strong sensation that I could actually
do it. And for some reason, I thought I should begin with
tracts.
My first efforts
emerged in my typing class at Gentry High School. I’d
been reading tracts
like The Burning
Helland
Where Will You Be Five Minutes
After You Die?I was intrigued by their catchy
titles, their brevity, their urgent tone and their
overall simplistic
style.
Once or twice a
week, after completing my typing assignments in class, I
would write my own tracts on plain typing paper and hand
them out to fellow students. Oh, I wanted to “win souls”
by urging people to trust in Christ as Savior. But in the
back of my mind, I was also thinking I could impress
Beatrice.
During the late
1970s, I read hundreds of small books that were published
by well-known evangelists. My reading list included the
works of W.V. Grant Sr., Kenneth Hagin, James Robison,
David Nunn, Oral Roberts, Billy Graham and Jimmy
Swaggart, among others. With each book, I felt a desire
to write one of my own. The more I read, the more I
wanted to write.
A strange
discovery – and a broken
heart
By the time I was
17 and had spent some time preaching, I felt I had to
write a book. No question about it. So, convinced I would
become an author, I began telling people about my dream.
At first their reaction surprised me. Everyone gasped and
congratulated me. They showered me with praise.
Overnight, it seemed, I had new-found respect, even
though the book had not been written – and I knew nothing
about publishing. For the first time in my life, I was
starting to see what Joe Vitale has talked about: “People
bow to authors. They view them as experts, as symbols of
authority.”
Now I was on to
something. Surely Beatrice would be impressed. She and I
both were devout followers of the Pentecostal faith. Our
idols were not sports stars, but well-known evangelists
with healing ministries. If I could author a book, I
reasoned, she would see me as one of the big guys,
someone on the level of a big time
evangelist.
But as life would
have it, things did not go according to plan. One day in
the spring of 1980, I tried to reach Beatrice to announce
my plans to write a book. To my utter dismay, I learned
from her mother that she had left town. She ran away and
got married to a preacher – someone who was older and had
a lot more money than
I.
Though crushed by
the news, I vowed I would still be a writer. “Who knows?”
I thought. “When I become famous, I’ll find her.” My
over-riding desire was to one day say: “Take a look at me
now!”
Although a number
of experiences had prompted my interest in writing, it
took a broken heart to make me pursue it with passion. In
truth, the pain was actually a blessing in disguise as it
became the driving incentive -- the motivating force --
that ignited my determination to live and succeed with
words.
In April 1980, I
joined the U.S. Army and left Mississippi. I wanted to be
far removed from the memories of Beatrice, as well as the
poverty and segregation of my small town. At the same
time, I wanted to travel and see the world. Over time I
would live in other countries and learn about different
cultures. My traveling would prove to be an invaluable
education for me as a creative
person.
The man who
‘fires’
writers
I took basic
training in Fort Dix, N.J., and my training as a
chaplain’s assistant in Fort Monmouth, N.J. Throughout
this period, I told my friends of my dream to write and
become an author. All of them seemed amazed. When the
training became more than I could bear, I thought of my
dream: It reduced my stress level and calmed my fears.
Dreaming, I found, was especially helpful during road
marches and long
runs.
One day I was
sitting in the barracks reading a magazine when I saw an
ad that grabbed my attention. It
read:
“I FIRE
WRITERS! …
Fire them with
enthusiasm for developing
God-given
writing
talent. You can ‘get fired’
too.”
Intrigued, I tore
out the page on which the ad appeared and tucked it in my
pocket.
About a year
later, I was stationed at Fort Riley, Kan., when a friend
introduced me to Writer’s
Digestand
The
Writer, magazines I’d never heard of.
When I flipped through the pages, I got excited. To my
surprise, there were other people who wanted to write and
become authors. I was not the only one with this wild
dream.
It wasn’t long
before I had another surprise. We had completed a 5-mile
run -- in boots, and a 15-mile road march, and I was
sitting on a top bunk massaging my swollen, blistering
feet. I started reading my first copy
of Writer’s
Digestwhen I spotted a familiar face.
It was Norman B. Rohrer and his ad, “I FIRE
WRITERS!”
I read the ad
again and thought about its potential to make my dreams
come true. That was around 1981. I put the magazine down
and put off the decision to sign up for the course. A
year later, I found myself in Pirmasens, West Germany,
when I saw the ad
again.
Learning from
a home-study
course
The early 1980s
would prove to be an exciting time for me. It was a
period of growth, traveling and many discoveries. For one
thing, just being in Germany was an experience in itself.
Remember, I was a country bumpkin. Certified. A poor
black kid from the south. And living in another country
was almost more than I could take. Each day was a new
experience. Sometimes I would literally pinch myself to
make sure I wasn’t
dreaming.
It really felt
good. Imagine how I felt when I realized I was actually
living in and visiting the places I had read about in
school. What a thrill! Though I’d never studied a second
language in school, now I was learning to speak German
and a little French and Spanish. All for the first
time.
On weekends I
visited countries like France, Switzerland, the
Netherlands, Austria. A couple of days a week, I took
courses through the college programs on post. Since there
was so much to see, I purchased a camera and took photo
classes. Truly, my world was one big party. But it got
even better.
I finally pulled
out the ad, “I FIRE WRITERS!” and signed up for Norman B.
Rohrer’s writing
course, Discover Your Possibilities in
Writing. It was a three-year course
that was offered by the Christian Writers Guild (Now
Jerry B. Jenkins Christian Writers Guild). There was no
mistaken: I was ready to be “fired” with enthusiasm for
developing whatever talent I thought I
had.
Surprisingly, the
course covered all aspects and forms of writing. Through
the course, I learned how to publish in magazines and
newspapers. The course covered such topics as
advertising, writing publicity, nonfiction books, tracts,
magazine articles, short stories, novels. It also
included instructions on writing for radio and
television. To top it all off, each lesson came with a
critique and market advice. Inspired, I purchased a
portable manual typewriter, which I named, “Christina,”
and went to work.
The Christian
Writers Guild motivated me and enabled me to discover my
possibilities in writing. It helped me to see writing for
all it’s worth. It showed me in simple terms how to
write, how to recognize good ideas and how to sell what I
was writing. It encouraged me to develop my own style and
to read good writing. It stressed the importance of
writing every day and of keeping a notebook or
journal.
What was truly
amazing though, was Rohrer’s insistence that I really
could write and get published. Wow! He believed in me.
His own enthusiasm, through his letters and the course,
made me feel I could conquer the world. Eagerly, I
latched onto all of his advice like a drowning man
clinging to a life rope. I had my flaws: poor spelling,
bad grammar, limited vocabulary. But I was determined to
rise above them.
Beatrice, the
former love of my life, was still in my thoughts, but the
more I learned about writing, the less I wanted to
impress her. Little by little, she started to fade from
my memory as I was falling in love with words and the
powerful ways they could be expressed. Truly, I’d found a
higher calling.
My first
byline and payment for
writing
Armed with the
knowledge I’d gained from the writing course, I began to
contact editors of magazines and newspapers in an effort
to see my first byline. Unfortunately, I didn’t know how
hard it would be. When I sent out queries and manuscripts
to different magazines, they all came back with rejection
slips. And each rejection made me question my abilities.
Sometimes I wondered aloud if I could ever be published.
This was compounded by the fact that I was a lousy
speller and was weak in grammar. And I could not remember
the rules of English
composition.
Despite all of
these doubts and shortcomings, Norman B. Rohrer was
always there when I needed encouragement. His letters and
anecdotes about writing gave me the nerve I needed to
drive on in the face of despair. Thanks to him, I
persevered and continued to experiment, even as the
rejection slips from magazines started piling
up.
Encouraged, I
began to explore other types of writing. The urge I had
for publication was unmistakable. It was something I
could not shake off. I simply had to be published. So I
volunteered to write for the local Army
newspaper, The Community
Times. As I recall, the first piece I
wrote was a press release about a Christian coffee house
at the Pirmasens Community Chapel. This short article,
which carried my first byline, resulted in a number of
other stories being published in the same newspaper, all
of which came with much pride and
exhilaration.
My happiest
moment, however, was the publication of my first magazine
article, for which I received as payment – a $14 check.
It was entitled, “Helping Others: A Key to Longer
Living,” and was published by
the Church of God
Evangel.I was so excited, I literally
jumped for joy and then fell on floor shaking, like I was
having a seizure. I wanted to frame the check, but a
friend said, “Copy it, cash it and then frame the
copy.”
In 1982, I sold
my first gospel tract to Herald Press. It was
called, No Time to
Scream. For that short piece of
writing, I was paid $25. Before the year was out, I sold
another tract to Herald Press, entitled,
“Do You Read
Me?” And for the next few years, I
would sell over 10 tracts to this same
publisher.
Coping with
rejection
I wish I could
say that I no longer received rejection slips. The truth
is I continued to receive them, especially for book
proposals. At times, the rejection threw me into bouts of
depression. I kept Alka-Seltzers® and Rolaids® nearby to
ease my stomach, which was usually in knots after
learning of a rejection. One day as I lamented over my
situation, my sister, Barbara, made a striking comment:
“It’s a good thing you don’t drink … or you’d be an
alcoholic by now.”
So how did I
cope? What was it that kept me going in spite of the
pain? Unlike today, there were no online chat rooms and
discussion groups through which I could share my pain
with others. Oh, there were writing clubs and conferences
– but not in my region. And quite honestly, I couldn’t
afford to travel out of state to attend
any.
My
solution?
Well, I did
several things.
-
I subscribed to all of the writing magazines I could
afford. They gave me hope in the midst of my
frustrations.
-
I read the biographies of other writers, particularly
those who overcame rejection to find
success.
-
I watched movies with an inspirational theme. “Coal
Miner’s Daughter,” the story of country singer Loretta
Lynn, was one of my
favorites.
-
I stayed in touch with my instructor, Norman B. Rohrer.
He always had a word of wisdom that brightened my
day.
-
I purchased teaching tapes from the Christian Writers
Guild and played them over and
over.
One of the tapes,
“The Excitement of Words” by Sherwood E. Wirt, became my
constant companion and a soothing antidote for my
depression. Wirt made one comment that really got me
going. He said: “You may not be a success, but if you can
handle words, you will never
starve.”
Writing for a
living
When I left
Germany in the spring of 1984, I had an honorable
discharge from the Army and a portfolio packed with clips
of my work from newspapers, magazines and tracts. I had
also completed Rohrer’s course and received a diploma
along with a strong commencement
address:
“This series of
lessons has been designed to teach you how to write
material which will bless a world of needy people,”
Rohrer wrote. “You have taken the first step through the
door marked ‘Possibilities in Writing.’ The road ahead
will not always be easy. Good things are never so. But it
will be a rewarding
passage.”
Rohrer made this
challenge: “Decide now that you’re not going to be an
occasional writer, but rather one who is serious about
communicating in print. Strive to achieve the goals God
has inspired you to
set.”
I returned to my
hometown of Indianola, Miss., burning with a desire to
write for a living. I wanted to use words to put food on
the table; and I was willing to make any sacrifice, even
if it meant taking a factory job by day and a writing job
by night. I had to see if I could earn a decent living by
the use of written communication. This desire, which
began as a dream, soon became an
obsession.
Fortunately, I
found a job as a reporter
for The
Enterprise-Tocsin
, the small,
award-winning weekly in my hometown, Indianola,
Mississippi. It paid little but the training was great.
Publisher Jim Abbott and his managing editor, David
Rushing, took me under their wings and showed me the
ropes of newspaper reporting. They gave me a chance when
other nearby papers had refused to hire me. I’ll always
be grateful to both of
them.
Abbott and
Rushing had a couple of things in common: They both spoke
with a strong southern drawl and they loved investigative
reporting, something they had mastered over the years.
And for which, they’d earned a wall full of press
awards.
Abbott, a runner,
was tall and slim and always clean-shaven. He had dark
curly hair, a charming personality and huge eyes that
could light up a room. He wore glasses that gave him the
image of a college professor. Rushing, on the other hand,
was a portly figure who chewed tobacco and walked like a
cowboy. He had a great sense of humor but he also thrived
on heated confrontations, especially with stubborn news
sources. I admired his swagger and the way he carried his
notebook. He would often tuck the notebook in his back
pocket and then walk about town with his arms extended
out from his sides – just like a cowboy getting ready to
draw. To see him walk, you’d think he was the badest man
around. I so admired Rushing, I found myself trying to
walk just like
him.
My stint
at The
Enterprise-Tocsin
resulted in a
First Place Award for Best Investigative Reporting, which
was awarded me by the Mississippi Press Association. The
award was for the research I did on cotton chopping and
how the field workers were paid. The first place
recognition was a highlight in my writing journey, giving
me the validation I needed to grow and establish myself
as a true wordsmith. I remember thinking back to Norman
B. Rohrer. “News writing is basic to all other forms of
writing,” he said. “The person who is capable first in
garnering accurate and detailed information and then in
setting it out in an interesting manner is a person in
demand.”
The experience I
gained with Abbott and Rushing opened doors for me at
other newspapers, where I honed my skills in research and
learned to interview and communicate like a professional
journalist.
Without a doubt,
I’ll always have fond memories of my time
at The
Enterprise-Tocsin
. A moment I’ll
never forget involved my grandfather and an interview
with a construction supervisor who happened to be white.
The supervisor and his crew were working on the street
near my home. It was the middle of summer and they were
surrounded by dust, mounds of dirt, concrete and loud
machinery. When I went out to see him, my grandfather,
McKinley Jackson, tagged
along.
My grandfather, a
mild-mannered man, was dark black and had strong negroid
features. He was built like a slim brick layer, having
veiny arms and a strong back. He always wore khakis –
pants and shirt -- and was never without his Garret
Snuff®. Unfortunately, my grandfather never learned to
read or write. He also grew up in an era where southern
blacks did not make eye contact with whites. So when he
saw me having a face-to-face interview with the white
supervisor, he squinted in disbelief. At the same time,
he seemed proud. He couldn’t believe that a white man
would stop and give this kind of attention to me, his
young “daring” black
grandson.
When the
interview was over, my grandfather walked home with me,
almost bursting with pride. In his usual gait, he rocked
from side to side with each step and with his hands in
his pockets.
“Junior,” he said
to me. “That was real nice.” He twisted his mouth and
spat, and then wiped the snuff from his bottom lip.
“Never thought I’d see the day,” he said. “That was real
nice.”
His comment so
deeply affected me, I choked up and could not speak.
Instead, I went into the house and
cried.
Making a
life-changing
vow
In August of
1984, I made a vow that would have a tremendous impact on
my writing career. The idea occurred to me while riding a
Greyhound bus from Mississippi to North Carolina. I was
thinking about my grandfather and the possibilities, as
well as the responsibilities, in writing, when a
three-fold commitment came to mind. I vowed that from
that day forward, I
would:
-
Seek to write for the papers in whatever town I call
home.
-
Regularly seek out new markets among magazines, tract
publishers and book
publishers.
-
Write to honor God and to help anyone in
need.
I endeavored to
keep this vow at all cost. As a student at East Coast
Bible College (Charlotte, N.C.), I wrote for the student
paper, The
Coastline,
and for the local
papers, The Charlotte
Leaderand
The Carolina
Observer. In 1986, when I moved to Rocky
Mount, N.C., I became a staff writer
for The Nashville
Graphic,where I learned a lot about
“scooping the competition” from Publisher Hal Sharpe. In
1988, I re-enlisted for the Army and was stationed in
Vilseck, Germany. While there, I wrote
for The Training
Timesand
EurArmy
. Thanks to the
guidance of Dr. Jan Sutherland, I also had two short
stories published: one in the German
publication, Litspeak
, and the other,
in Notebook
.
Perhaps it was
the “hustler” in me, a passionate urge -- something like
an obsession (or maybe ambition) -- that made me crave
publication. Writing, it seemed, was both my job and my
hobby. I did it to pay the bills as well as to have fun.
I simply couldn’t get enough of it. The only thing that
came close to feeding this need, was reading – and
talking about what I’d read. Guess it’s safe to say that
I took my vow
seriously.
Around the spring
of 1986, something occurred at East Coast Bible College
that gave me a new respect for the power of writing. A
young browned-haired student came to me one day and said
he was attending the school because of an article he saw
in Lighted
Pathway, one of the magazines published
by the Church of God (Cleveland, Tenn.). Incidentally,
the article was one I’d written that focused on
discouragement and commitment. It was entitled, “Burning
Your Boats,” or something like
that.
“Are you the
Roscoe Barnes who wrote that article?” he
asked.
“Yes, I’m the
one,” I said, modestly. Almost embarrassed by the
question.
“My God! I don’t
believe it!” he said. “I guess I have you to thank for my
being here.”
The kid who said
this was white. And while his race was not an issue, the
experience showed me that writing could cross racial
barriers. Though I was black, my published work had
reached out across racial lines and inspired a young
white kid to go to college. My race didn’t matter; it was
my writing that
counted.
“What an awesome
tool,” I thought.
After encouraging
the young student, I went to my room in the dorm and fell
on my knees and prayed. I thanked God for the gift he’d
given me and for allowing me to be a channel of this
literary power.
My venture
into self-publishing and
marketing
In 1992, while a
student at The Lutheran Theological Seminary (Gettysburg,
Pa.), I worked as a correspondent
for The Gettysburg
Times. So taken by the subject of
writing, I chose it as the topic for my seminary thesis.
It was called, “Luther as Pamphleteer: A Look at His
Employment of Unpretentious Media to Communicate
Theological Truth.” After I defended the thesis, the
school awarded me the Master of Arts in
Religion.
While working for
different newspapers as a staff writer, I continued to
publish articles in various magazines. But it was when I
self-published my first book that I really learned about
marketing in general -- and copywriting in particular.
Throughout the late '80s and early 90s, I read every book
I could find on publishing, marketing, advertising and
mailorder. Some of the titles that left an indelible
impression on me
were:
Those two books
introduced me to mailorder, or as it’s called today,
“direct response marketing.” They provided me with the
basics in using words to sell, promote and market
products (and services) by mail. They taught me much. But
there was more to learn. So I
read:
-
Publish and
Promote Your Own
Bookby Ted
Nicholas
-
The Copywriter’s
Handbook
by Robert W.
Bly
-
The Complete
Guide to
Self-Publishing
by Tom and Marilyn
Ross
-
The
Self-Publishing
Manualby Dan
Poynter
-
Olgivy on
Advertising
by David
Olgivy
-
Confessions of
an Advertising
Manby David
Olgivy
-
Tested
Advertising Methods
by John Caples
-
My First 65
Years in Advertising
by Maxwell
Sackheim
-
How to Get Rich
in Mailorder
by Melvin
Powers
-
Self-publishing,
Self-taught
by Peter
McWilliams
-
My Life in
Advertising & Scientific
Advertising
by Claude
Hopkins
I also devoured
the works of Joe Vitale, Lee Howard, Dr. Jeffrey Lant,
Dan Kennedy, Gary Halbert and Galen Stilson, among
others.
The knowledge
gained from these books enabled me to successfully
self-publish Discover Your Talent and Find
Fulfillment
and
Big Bucks from Little
Sketches. The latter title was used by
International Correspondence Schools (ICS) of Pennsylvania.
Both books were initially sold through direct response ads
placed in selected magazines and newsletters. They were also
sold in bookstores. Both titles generated press coverage from
newspapers. A few times, I promoted them on TV and
radio.
Selling
thousands of
books
The success
of Big Bucks from Little
Sketchesproved to be a classic lesson in
creativity and persistence. Before I ever thought of
publishing it myself, I tried for two years to sell it to
traditional publishers, but to no avail. One agent read
it for a small fee and then said it needed to be larger
(it was under 100 pages) and include pictures. Out of
sheer disappointment, I chose to drop the manuscript in a
drawer until I could figure out a way to sell it. After
all, I sincerely believed in the
work.
One evening in
the fall of 1993, I re-read some advice from Melvin
Powers. In an interview with Russ von Hoelscher, Powers
encouraged new writers to first self-publish their work
as a manual or special report – before spending thousands
of dollars to have it printed and professionally bound.
Producing the product in this low-cost format allows you
to save money and test the waters without losing the
shirt off your back, Powers explained. If the product
proved a failure, you haven’t lost much; if it succeeds,
you can take the money and upgrade the product to a
professionally bound
book.
This all made
sense to me. So I printed out the manuscript
for Big Bucks from Little
Sketches, punched three holes in it and
placed it in a three-ring report folder. I started
advertising, using small classifieds, in various art
magazines. Within a few weeks, the orders started to pour
in. Going to the post office was a pure delight, as I
opened about three to five envelopes daily containing
checks for my
publication.
After a few
months of selling via mailorder, it occurred to me that I
could do something different. Most of the publishing
books I’d read recommended selling through bookstores or
through the mail. But one day I was reading some direct
mail packages from ICS when I remembered they had an art
department. I wondered if they could use my book. The
more I thought about it, the more it seemed possible. So
one day, I wrote up a script (something picked up from
telemarketers) and rehearsed it several
times.
When I was
confident of my presentation, I called ICS and spoke to
the director of the art department, who was very kind and
a bit surprised. She asked me to send samples of the book
and promised to get back to me. Well, I did and four
months later, she sent me a letter of congratulations:
The school had agreed to purchase a thousand copies of my
book each year and use them as supplemental guides for
their art
students.
I had dared to
try something I’d never heard of -- or had ever done
before -- and it paid off. I couldn’t help but think back
to my father, who said, “There’s a way to do
anything!”
The excitement
of scooping the
competition
All the time that
I was learning to sell books, I was developing an
appetite for marketing and copywriting. I continued to
work as a news reporter, but I couldn’t pull myself away
for the books on
marketing.
When I
joined The Record
Heraldin 1994, I was the only reporter
on staff without a degree in Journalism or English. For
this reason, I felt the need to prove myself. Though I
still had problems with spelling and grammar, I believed
my hard work and determination would more than make up
for the short-comings. So I determined from day one to be
different and to do something that hadn’t been done
before at the
paper.
To begin, I made
an assessment of myself and noted my strengths in
interpersonal communication and marketing. I knew from my
experience as a minister that people found it easy to
open up to me. People knew I was honest and could be
trusted. Consequently this single skill – interpersonal
communication – became a tool for interviewing subjects,
finding tipsters and cultivating sources. In time, it
would result in major stories, some of which had a
profound impact on the
community.
One of the first
stories I broke involved a doctor who committed suicide
on an operating table. He left a two-page suicide note
that was not released to the public. But after three
months of digging, I got a copy of the note and published
it with my story about the suicide. Everyone
congratulated me on the work, including the reporters
from area papers. Before long, I became known as an
investigative reporter in that
community.
At this point, I
drew on my marketing skills and worked hard to further my
image as an investigative reporter. For example, I never
hesitated to tell a prospective source, “I’m the reporter
who did the story about the doctor who committed
suicide.” Or, “I broke the story about the ‘jail house
rock’ in Maryland.” This acknowledgement, it seemed,
worked to my advantage by enhancing my credibility as a
daring reporter. My efforts paid off in quite a few ways
and resulted in many tipsters who’d call on me to uncover
stories throughout the
community.
After breaking a
number of stories, I decided to put my secrets into a
book. So I wrote, Scooping the Competition: How to
Be FIRST in Reporting Hot
Stories, and published it as a
comb-bound manual. It didn’t get picked up by a publisher
but it caught the eyes of various press associations.
This led to invitations to do seminars and workshops for
good pay. The manual was later accepted and sold by the
National Newspaper Association and
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